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This is my recent design which I created for my arcade online flash games, The design is being coded but surely I welcome all the comments to improve the design in anyway.

Thanks! :)

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:iconr51:
The header looks boring to me, honestly. The simple sans-serif over a gradient background reminds me a bit of those domain squatters who just use domains with generic pages to put a list of ad-sponsored links up, for instance [link] . If this is for your flash games, then clearly you're a more-than-adequate flash developer, so why not punch up the design of your site a bit more using your skills? There's nothing wrong with the site, at all, but I just think the subject matter calls for something a bit more innovative.

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Thanks for the suggestions. I'm going to improve the header and use a gradient behind the text and illustrate a gaming logo to make the header feel better.

Anyways, I'm not a animator but probably I'm going to try implimenting simple animations with flash.
:iconcommanderpink:
I like it, it v. good!
:iconyoshidude:
I agree with *r51 (although I don't think he realized that you aren't the one doing all the Flash games). This is a very nice and fuctional layout, and of course, function is the most important thing to a website design. I think the logo that you design would help a lot, and make it stand out as something much more unique and memorable. The only real thing that I don't like, rather than just could be improved, is the way you inserted the name and slogan. But I assume that will be a part of the new logo, so it's not a big deal.

Great start, hopefully it shapes up to be a really memorable design. Just remember to not sacrifice the great ease-of-use that you seem to currently have. I'll need to drop by the site when it goes up, looks like it could have some fun games.

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:iconmharis:
Thank you for constructive comments! I'm really happy that you liked the layout. This is the updated version after r51's comment but I believe I need to still create nice text(Need to use commerical fonts).

Anyways Thanks! :)
:iconyoshidude:
The font isn't too bad, could be snazzier though, yes. The logo is the thing that I really think needs to be jazzed up though. The logo should be able to be put anywhere and look good. Just think about that and see if you can get anything going.

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Haldo.
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:iconmharis:
Alright, Thanks for the comments. I'm surely going to think about some concepts and get it done into the design.
:icongreendragon737:
I like this one. It's not too much and not too little and very balanced. I don't really care for the header but it's pretty good.
:iconmharis:
Thank you for the comments! :)

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